Aspiring Anthropologist
The picture above is the basis for my story, which is taken from
Bill Sullivan's Turnstile Photography Project. His photography project is a compilation of pictures taken of a stranger's first moment going through the turnstiles to ride the subway.
Gratified, complacent, self-satisfied; these feelings of accomplishment rushed through Jane's head as she walked out the doors of the American Museum of Natural History. She had conquered her dream of graduating with a BA in anthropology and had just recently been placed at AMNH as one of the researchers of African Ethnology. That was how her day began to end as she walked toward the subway station after a long day of reading books at Barnes & Noble. She was a rather frugal person and found it to be very convenient to be sitting on the comfy couches and delving into a book about the conspiracy theories of the disappearance of the ancient Mayans. People's way of life always interested her as a child, for her upbringing was in a very diverse neighborhood in Queens, New York. However, she always thought there was a difference between learning about ones way of life and gossip. For a moment, while walking past the ticket booth and on her way to the subway she reminisced of her childhood. Out of mind and with her head in the clouds, contemplating of how her life would be and how far she's gone, she walked through the turnstiles on her way to visit her mom to tell her about the good news, and soon enough a slight smile began to form.
Labels: Writing
8 Comments:
At October 17, 2007 at 10:37 AM, Anonymous said…
i really like the way you ended your story. your story is interesting and I liked the way you started with those three adjectives describing how your character felt.
At October 17, 2007 at 10:48 AM, paris said…
creative,i thought of the movie "stranger than fiction" when the beginning narrative was read. =D
At October 17, 2007 at 10:49 AM, Guy said…
I thought the story was very interesting and deep. I really feel like I know the person after I read the creative write.
At October 17, 2007 at 10:49 AM, KANGaRangaDank said…
anna that comment by paris was actually made by me hahah i forgot to sign out of his account.
At October 17, 2007 at 10:53 AM, Ethan Stern said…
I really liked the end. I now want to meet this person. Great job!
At October 17, 2007 at 11:04 AM, alofasho said…
Thats really good Anna. I think it's cool how you took something as simple as the bag that she's wearing and you took it really far. It was very creative. I liked how her going through the terminal came in to the story.
-Mason
At October 17, 2007 at 11:23 AM, candace said…
The way you narrate seems positive, which is really nice. =]
The first sentence after those three words can be worded differently to sound better, but overall, I enjoyed your writing.
At October 17, 2007 at 6:35 PM, Yura said…
Great story, i really like the fact that it made me feel all good and happy. I could so imagine it happening.
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